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Reply blankd, January 4th, 2012, 12:31 am

Read through this all in one go, you definitely have skill with the layout/composition and backgrounds, but if I were to give a critique it feels like you're telling too much sometimes in terms of the characters and some of the non-human designs seem to lack visual malice when they ought to have some. However that could just be me, or you could have intended that.

Regardless, very beautiful inkwork. I'm not too sure about story or characters yet, but the comic is young and you have a passionate pace, I'm sure you'll show your prowess in those areas as well.

Reply Zhriffixx, January 4th, 2012, 4:56 pm

@blankd: Ah, thanks for the comment/review. I understand about the bit with the characters; I usually get critique for either being too vague with them or telling too much. It's definitely a fine line I'm still struggling with. I'm hoping as I continue working on this, I'll get better at storytelling and drawing monsters and such. Thanks for the encouragement!

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