Author's Comments:

Reply Zhriffixx, January 3rd, 2013, 7:34 pm

There was serious debate on whether or not this page would make it in to this chapter. My friend said yes, so I decided to go for it.

Also, bad transition is bad transition. Gaah. I need to seriously sit down one day and redraw some of these sequences.

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User's Comments:

Reply LadyArrowsmith, January 4th, 2013, 7:53 am

That's such a random way to try and wake someone up. XD

Reply Zhriffixx, January 4th, 2013, 3:38 pm

@LadyArrowsmith: Haha. Samantha likes doing strange things.

Reply Anon (Guest), January 4th, 2013, 6:58 pm

I'm not sure what tto think of Samantha's expression. It seems somehow out of place in the comic.

Reply Zhriffixx, January 5th, 2013, 11:54 am

@Anon: I sometimes think this entire page is out of place with the comic, haha. It's why I was seriously considering taking it out, but I think on some level it makes Samantha slightly more interesting and that outweighed the weirdness of it? I dunno. Thanks for letting me know what you think!

Reply Smarty-like, January 5th, 2013, 2:51 pm

The pacing is somewhat off, maybe adding a speech bubble with periods in the third panel. Doing so would help to point out that she's contemplating something. Right now, it just seems to me that she's looking at ___(forgot her name. Whoops!) and not much else.

I like this page, it adds to her personality. Somewhat obnoxious and spontaneous

Umm...Yeah, now I'm going to slink off...and... -__-

Reply Zhriffixx, January 5th, 2013, 5:36 pm

@Smarty-like: Hi, thanks for your comment! Originally the second panel had no dialogue, so perhaps adding dialogue there threw the pacing off. I dunno. The entire page (plus the last couple) make me a bit frustrated in every department, haha. I'm a bit against using (...) unless absolutely necessary, but thanks for the suggestion. And I'm glad you like the page :)

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